Oops. I uh - well, there was a lot of background to cover and it was sort of right there in my head so on second thought, yeah, it might have been a bit clearer about where all the characters were coming from. -_-;
Happy to hear the read was still fun, and thanks for pointing out in the nicest way possible that next time, I should maybe use a lot more exposition. <3
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Date: 2010-09-27 11:10 am (UTC)Happy to hear the read was still fun, and thanks for pointing out in the nicest way possible that next time, I should maybe use a lot more exposition. <3